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for Forever Beloved

by AddictedToJack

person Llsa
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeee finishhhhhhhhh I really want read the restttt
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This a awesome story and I would love to read the rest when it is finished thank you for taking the time to bring us a story that is funny and sweet a excellent read.
person Fate
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Who is the mysterious man? I must find out soon or I'll go crazy!
Update asap...Plz...
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this so far. interesting to see a deceptive elizabeth
person Elena Pardel
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"10 days"? What happens in 10 days!? The next chapter I hope! lol
I think that is our very own Jack Sparrow that snuck into Lizzie's house. Who else would sneak around in the shadows?
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic cliffhanger!! I cannot wait to read the next chapter!! And you're very welcome for the reviews my dear :) xoxoxo Keep up the fantastic work...I have greatly enjoyed this story!!

JackSparrowsWench
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay thanks for the update!! It was wonderful!! And I can't wait for the next update to see how long it will take William to realize that Elizabeth is really in love with Jack!!

JackSparrowsWench
person LizzieSwan
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There was a song saying:'Gimme gimme more...'! Please do so! It's great! Oh that INFAMOUS Pirate...I know she Couldn't resist Dear ol' Jack!..
GO On!
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was an awsome start .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...talk about a scary moment!! Love the story and I can't wait for the update!!

JackSparrowsWench