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for A Strangle of Veins

by PurpleTwist

schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as you can, please!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Verrry interesting turn of events. I mean, the glass shattering? Wow! And the fact that it was brought on by a 15 year old girl only adds to the situation. I enjoy that Joker isnt quite sure how to take Estell. Normally he can figure people out so easily. Its interesting to see how he reacts to a challenge. He doesnt know whether shes a patient or not but thinks that she should be one Lol! That was pretty humorous. I also like the way youve got Joker talking. It makes him appear more intimidating and sadistic. Very well done! I hope to see another update soon!!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Annnnnd you strike again. Another awesome chapter. I love the amount of energy you put in to your writing and the way you play the Joker, is really good too; you've even got the inflection to convey his moods and general accent, down to a T.
Very cool.

Update Soon
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome start to what I think, and no doubt it will be, a really amazing story. I like the in-depth detail you've go into and the conclusion to this chapter, was really good. Major Kudos.

Update soon

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