rate_review Reviews

Love the story. You should write more though. Hurry and update!

Dear Muse of Anon,
Your writing is amazing. I have read all the versions of A God's Good Humor that you have posted on AFF and I love them all even the one with m-preg. Your writing is full of imagination and creativity and I can't wait till you post the next chapter. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the rest of A God's Good Humor. ^___^

Wahoo, update!
Lovely little scene there. You write so vividly it's such a joy. I'm very excited for more and I'm glad you're keeping up with the story. ^_^

Squee! An update, I'm so happy. I've gotten so used to stories never getting updated (*coughs* my own included) that I really didn't expect this. Thank you so much as I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I've decided I do like this version better though I do still have a soft spot for the original as well. I'm weird like that. Can't wait for more of course and that scene you described of Elizabeth on the beach is so pretty I want to be there too. Though I'll always root for turrow pairings I admit willabeth is one of the few het couples I actually like. ^_^

Love the story, love you. Can't wait for more.

“Will, I’m Captain Jack Sparrow. I’m not an idiot.” Jack smiled, warningly. “I have more then one key.”

That line really cracked me up. I can picture Jack saying it so clearly in my mind, the fact that he's starkers only makes it even more enjoyable. *grins*

I like this version of the story. I liked the old one too, but I think I like this one just a little bit more. I hope you'll leave them both up, but I understand the self-critism. I get the same way. There's so much of my shit I want to delete and never think of again.

Hope the updates come as planned, but definitely understand if it's not always on time. I couldn't work and go to school full time. I give you credit for it.

I think version 2.0 is definetly a better version. The characters are more complex. I do hope Will wins a round, though! (not the war, just a round.)

love your story its the right mixture of sexy and funny cant wait for more :P

I'm kinda partial to the first version, I liked Will's reaction better in it but there are parts of this version that are good too. I think you are a very good writer no matter which story you choose to go with.

I think, that it was good, that you took the time to better your writing, even if I cant see when will you actually finish one of your stories. This version is better in the places you take the time to explain why would this or that character act in a certain way. I also like that you have written more detail in it and I absolutely adored the first part of your story.
The only thing I found amiss, is that you have some spelling mistakes. Nothing a spell check wont solve.

this 1 is the best,I can't wait 4 more