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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good job so far and i agree with the oral skipping nice touch.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done for your first sex scene...and absolutely they do get better the more you write them. Lol yes there is quite an obsession with oral sex in this fandom...but it's okay. Nice work again..keep up the great work!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaah! The fic is goin' great! I realy liked the fact(don't think I'm a heartless bitch, but..) that Lizzie had lost the baby and the divorce!!!...I'm so excited to know what happens text, although that kiss shocked me a bit(wasn't it a bit too early?..But hey you're the writer;))
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn those evil cliffhangers!! Lol...but they do make the story better. So I guess I can just wait for the next chapter like everyone else. Fantastic work though and I can't wait for some steamy J/E action!!
JackSparrowsWench
JackSparrowsWench
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start of this story...very promising indeed. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
JackSparrowsWench
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