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Oh gawd, you have no idea how much I simply love you.

I just got home from seeing Star Trek (for the second time) only to find that you've updated! I've had the most tantalizing time reading this chapter, the characters' voices in my head perfectly, while picturing everything that was happening clearly. Oh, how I loved when Jim nuzzled Spock's hand. I absolutely love the fact that Vulcan's hands are so sensitive, and when Jim isn't aware of it. Teasing touches and kisses. Heh, I'm completely ecstatic.

As you, no doubt, are perfectly aware, I adore your writing. I find that your characterizations of every one that you write to be pretty much spot you. You weedle inside their heads and make them into something more than what we see on the big screen, or little screen in case of TOS.

I must sound like a crazed fangirl. I'm just buzzing with excitement and anticipation. I sincerely hope that you won't leave us hanging for long in regards to a following chapter. I check multiple times a day as it is.

Though, at the time when I first read this, I hadn't yet seen the new movie, but it certainly encouraged me to do so. Every since I've been nearly inhaling every Spock/Kirk I can get my hands, or eyes rather, on. I always look forward to an update from you the most, though, because I am so familiar with your incredible writing and know that you are able to deliver such wonderfully steamy and detailed scenes. I'm hooked, dahling. ;)

Until next time,
Lady D

I beyond love this story
you capture spock's thinking very well
please please update quickly!

I really like this story. I think you portray these characters really well, makes me jealous. Can Bones and Spock be able to protect Jim against Raines?

First of all, long time fan of your work, and this piece still has that charm. I love how each character has his own clear, distinct voice, even the minor characters. Just with the words and tone, I can easily tell who's talking and who's POV it is. The pacing is also beautifully done; telling the whole past incident could have been an incredibly long monologue, but the way you did it, breaking it up with character reactions and musing, was very well done, and showed more of the character quirks. The angst, while definitely present, isn't overbearing, and is broken by brief moments of humor or something else that made me grin, so bravo on that.
I can only imagine what's gonna happen next, and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for what's to come. Keep up the amazing work.
~Blue

Love the story. I think your doing very well with the characters. I love how protective and possesive Spock is being. I also enjoyed how you brought up the Pon Farr. Take good care of your Jim. I like him. But, I guess if anything bad happens Spock will just have to kiss him and make it all better.
Fang

I just have to pass this along: http://i42.tinypic.com/28wkub6.jpg And why yes, that is the man who plays Spock.

You're welcome~

Lady D

O.O holy crap!!


got anymore? ~_^

miko

Oh my gosh, pls update soon. I have to find out what happens with Jim.

OH
MY
GOODNESS
This is AMAZING. First the insanely epic Star Wars "Forbidden", and now this gorgeous new Star Trek 2009 fic? Gaahhh you are a genius. How can you create such wonderful stories? They are perfect. The best EVER. By far.
You own EVERYTHING. o.o

Only one chapter!!!!!????? AH! Your teasing me!!!!!!!! but thanx so much for the update!!!!!