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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say, I am really enjoying reading these! lol. I'm about to start on Lines Of Shodow as soon as I write this. lol. Your plots for these have been excelent and (of course) the smut is always good too. lol. Gotta be some of the best Hellboy fics I've read to date. lol. Keep up the great work! lol.
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you might want to fix the bottom of chapter 3 its really MESSY ...look you'll see.
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you didn't show us John's rape. I really have a hard time getting those kinds of images out of my mind. This is dark, darker than I thought it would be at first. You've done a great job with the characters. It really annoys me to see characters saying and doing things that are so far out of character, they're laughable. Damn you're good and damn cruel. Cliffhangers! Fucking hate them! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. I appreciate the effort.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!! John is loosing himself! So glad that you updated dude.
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally you updated! Its sad that John was raped! Good thing that pervert it dead!
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think the darkerness was just right!
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHH! I hope that ugly dude doesn't rape John!
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH THIS STORY! Its perfect the way it is that's why I love it!
I hope John would be alright.
I hope John would be alright.
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good luch with everything you have going on! You'll have at least one reader waiting for your next update. *hugs*
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can dig it.
Apart from your use of the word "Lycanthrope" where others might use "Lycanthropy," there's not much that flags for critical review. This (and its predecessor) have been extremely well-written, both abstractly and technically. The author captures the essences of the characters (down to mannerisms and speech devices) stunningly, the plots are, at once, believable and compelling. The construction of dialogue is natural and, more often than not, witty.
Plus, there's hot werewolf/demon sex.
Well-rounded and impressive. My compliments go to the author.
Apart from your use of the word "Lycanthrope" where others might use "Lycanthropy," there's not much that flags for critical review. This (and its predecessor) have been extremely well-written, both abstractly and technically. The author captures the essences of the characters (down to mannerisms and speech devices) stunningly, the plots are, at once, believable and compelling. The construction of dialogue is natural and, more often than not, witty.
Plus, there's hot werewolf/demon sex.
Well-rounded and impressive. My compliments go to the author.