rate_review Reviews

I criged at this line:

“It is quite pleasurable for me. I have never experienced this sensation of warmth which seems to be running through my entire body. I am becoming sexually aroused.”

Uh..wow. It wouold sound like something Spock would say if you took the word 'sexually' out. Maybe the entire last line...I don't know...it just sounded really cornball. @_@

But overall, I'm really liking your writing style...I just had to stop reading and make a quick comment. :D

Awesomeness. This was a wonderfully written story! Thanks for sharing!