rate_review Reviews

Just wanted you to know how awesome I think your story is. Have you ever had an inclination to write more of it?

Wow. This is fantastic! I hope you continue with this soon!

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Don't worry about accuracy. That's why they call it fanfiction. It doesn't have to be cannon. If readers wanted stuff that was completely cannon, then they're looking in the wrong place. The fact that you tried to make sense out of issues that would logically come up impresses me ^^ I think anyone who's ever tried writing xeno stories has had to think on toiletry issues. The story I'm writing, I ended that issue with her asking "Where's the toilet paper?" and him going "The what?" Keep in mind, you have a good stopping point once but I think you could go on for at least one more good chapter of them heading back to the base and making an adventurous escape off-world. Like I've said before, this is a great story (btw I was SL Barrett, but I got hitched over Xmas)

More.
Now.

I like your writing style, and where this story is going so I'd like to see it progress further, please!

yay! I got to read a new chapter! I know school sucks right.. lol But, you could always quit and write full-time for us.! hehe

Omg, please write more

Here's to hoping your health improves and you update soonest! I am very much enjoying how you do things here. Good stuff.

I think she should go with him and have a daughter with him because he seemed to have ton of sons already so I think it would be terribly romantic if their first child is a beautiful daughter, half human and half predator. He can be the doting predator father! lol. I love this story and I love your feisty female character. Please post soon!

Oh wow. Do please continue!

What others said about your writing is so true. You bring up details that most other stories won't or can't. Stuff that has been mentioned like the science and biology aspects of the Yautja and how they would aversely affect humans. And it fits in the context of the story so well since Laila is a scientist who studies biology, so I just love the whole Q&A going on with her and Aep'ep, well, that and what they do when they're not questioning each other ;)

Oh, and please tell me that reference to the japanese woman is who I think it is. Oh man if it weren't possible I'd love this story even more if you managed to include "her" somehow.

Again, please keep going. You rock!

Astounding! Your story is entertaining, sexy, and well written,
what a dynamic combination! I love the story and can not wait
for more!