rate_review Reviews

yays for this masterpiece finally being udated!

Wow I love your views as an author. I think that whatever you deem logical is whats best for your story. If its good enough for you to fantasize about, its good enough for your story...lolz. This story is so lush and erotic, while being intelligent and logical at the same time...love and Kudos

Great as always. Love the fact that you actually thought of the environment and how it would effect a human :) keep up the good work.

Ms.Moon

I have to say I am very impressed by your story, usually I hate OFC but this does make since. For a preditor to be interested in a human female enough to be willing to take her along for a ride she would be like this. And the story is very interesting read. I wonder how much of this information you are saying about the preditor is stuff that is known about it from the darkhorse comics vs stuff you are just makeing up to move the story along. Either way great story and well done!

I hope you finish soon!! IT IS GREAT!

I totally love your predator story Heat! You have a gift for imagery and I hope you finish the story!!!!!

Peace out,
Cricket

Hummm pretty nice story :D Waiting for more baby! ^__~

Wow, very very hot. You've written quite the couple here. I love how you write about their curiosities regarding one another, Laila in particular. A'apep certainly knows how to please, in every possible way it seems. I'm looking foward a lot to reading more about these two. And again, all the little details that you provide in the background are what really makes this story shine. Can't wait for the next part!

-DGD

this is really awesome so far!

I do like what you've done with it. Lots of smexxy and the Paya thing has me intrigued. And I don't if this would help but from my understanding of the comics, Yautja weren't against the use of cryogenics, though they didn't really need them. They only found them useful when in scenarios with humans as a "healing" sort of thing. Just throwing that tid-bit out there since Aapep was questioning her survival incase you needed some ideas. I don't know if you'd have the humans using that at this point, cause I'm not sure if Yautja would just have cryo-chambers lying collecting dust or not. Yay, complexity. Loves it though just as much as I did the first time I read your work...if not more!!! :3