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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. I did not see THAT coming. Mohahaha... very interesting. Please, do continue. =)
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this is a good one. Auburn shows she still hasn't lost her mind yet, and Mister J proves he hasn't lost his edge.
If only it was a little longer... oh well.
If only it was a little longer... oh well.
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You just make me wonder more and more how this all is going to end. I like it when I can't figure a story out. I like being kept on my toes like that, it makes my insides all tingly and fuzzy and crap. Man, I hope that your next chapter isn't far off.
Anon, I appreciate the little plug but I'd prefer it if you didn't plug mine (or anyone's) stories in the review section of another story. Seems rather rude to me. There's probably another, better way for you to recommend stories to another member.
Anon, I appreciate the little plug but I'd prefer it if you didn't plug mine (or anyone's) stories in the review section of another story. Seems rather rude to me. There's probably another, better way for you to recommend stories to another member.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter. i can't wait to see how it all ends. I really hope you update soon again.
karl the heretic > if you like really dark stuff there's a couple stories on here that are even darker than this one. there's one called alley cat or alley kitty that's really dark and the joker in it is really evil.
karl the heretic > if you like really dark stuff there's a couple stories on here that are even darker than this one. there's one called alley cat or alley kitty that's really dark and the joker in it is really evil.
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how sweet. A sex scene and no one got raped, sorta.
You're sounding more and more like Stephanie Meyer, though. It's how you're portraying the Joker; he isn't meant to be a sympathetic villain, he's a Complete Monster who does whatever he wants for the sheer hell of it (the evulz, if you will). And along the way, people die horribly.
The epitome of the Unfettered ubermensche, in a sense. Keep that in mind.
You're sounding more and more like Stephanie Meyer, though. It's how you're portraying the Joker; he isn't meant to be a sympathetic villain, he's a Complete Monster who does whatever he wants for the sheer hell of it (the evulz, if you will). And along the way, people die horribly.
The epitome of the Unfettered ubermensche, in a sense. Keep that in mind.
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... not sure what to make of it this time. Seems like more of the last chapter.
Unless... she isn't going to turn into Harley Quin, is she?
Unless... she isn't going to turn into Harley Quin, is she?
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, truly. Ye gods, I so fancy the way he toys with her. Even when she tries to be this subservient proverbial good girl and play by his rules, he'll still fuck her over in more ways than one. Bwahaha... oh man, I'm so evil sometimes. Anyways. Great chapter, writing was lovely; couldn't spot any boo-boos. More now, I say!
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention that I really like the hints at the Joker's narcissism, how he peruses himself in the mirror without giving her a second glance. Sorry to post another review like this, but there's no way of editing existing reviews.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, now she's a horny, overeager slut? Nice.
At least the Joker's done being -too- predictable.
At least the Joker's done being -too- predictable.
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Amber.. that was really brutal. Though, I love you for the regular updates!