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Woah. that was a great chapter. It was very well done wit the Joker masturbating and having Auburn watch him.

The end made me laugh. But, again, the Joker seems too human.

I was writing this long, lovely review this morning, and just when I hit "review", AFF had it's moment of downtime. I was a pissy panda. But I'll try to reconstruct my review.

I really fancy your portrayal of the Joker in this fic. I've always fancied the Joker in film, first Jack Nicholson, and recently, Heath Ledger. Psychopathy at it's finest and sexiest, really. I haven't had much luck finding Joker fics that I like - I daresay that all of the ones I've managed to find have a Joker who's fluffy, silly, romantic. NO. Just... NO NO NO. Your Joker is twisted, malicious, sadistic, psychopathic, dark. And I can't tell you how much I applaud you for writing him that way. He bashes Auburn's head into the floor, etc. - BRILLIANT. He is as he should be, and I'm a sick puppy, but that's just how I like him. So please, keep writing this yummy fic, and don't be scared of keeping it dark.

Otherwise, your writing is pleasant to read and I haven't discovered any mangled grammar or such. I enjoy the way you weave your sentences very much. So please.... do update soon.

And if you make the Joker into a fluffy romance wub wub idiot.... I will send you my e-poop. =D

Such fun. Yet, the way you portray the Joker is a little too human; he should be more demonic, more evil.

I'm really enjoying this story! :)

Wow! Scary and tense. It's not often you find a really likeable OC heroine, but this is a winner. I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens! (oh, one spelling pick: in the most recent chapter, it should be 'gouge' his eyes, not 'gauge'. Small thing, I know, but this story deserves to hit on all cylinders!

Great one. I like the slow build up you're taking with this story.

I'm really loving this story. I can't wait to read more of it.

Very good!

Woah.
This is a great start and I like the plot line. Looking forward to more