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for Starscream's failure

by swordqueen

person Garboil
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've actually been really enjoying all the Decepticon non-con too, I just haven't been reviewing it because I *excepted* to enjoy it. Whereas enjoying the xeno was kind of a shock. (Although I should have been clued in that you'd pull it off from the total lack of holoforms).

Anyway, all of these are really good. I'm not going to review them all independently because the AFF review mechanism is annoying as fuck, but you keep everyone's characterization consistent (including poor Barricade being consistently less of a hardass than he likes to think he is, and I imagine June gets annoyed by him psychoanalyzing every little thing she does), and it's all pretty believable. It makes sense that the Decepticons would treat rape casually, as something expected and inevitable. It's not like the Decepticons allow subordinates to refuse their other orders, why would they expect to have a choice about sex?

The only thing that's weird is that (again) Starscream fails to extent the same logic to Jennifer.
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Starscream! Good short story...I liked it.

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