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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When Barricade told he that he wouldn't be gentile... Just... *Guh*. I... am way too much of a Xeno sub. Seriously. It's sad.
I'm still loving June; I see so much of myself in her. (After the "Neat! It's blue!" line from the last chapter, how can anyone *not* lover her?)
“You want trust?” This is me. This is who I am. The disgusting pervert. All of it."
“...Oh my god that is so hot.”
^
That's just such a "me" thing to say. I love June.
I'm still loving June; I see so much of myself in her. (After the "Neat! It's blue!" line from the last chapter, how can anyone *not* lover her?)
“You want trust?” This is me. This is who I am. The disgusting pervert. All of it."
“...Oh my god that is so hot.”
^
That's just such a "me" thing to say. I love June.
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think what I like most about this is that we have a confident older woman, not a teenybopper, and that it's the 'bots who are the puritanical ones. Even the Decepticons. Also, their interface equipment actually kind of makes sense.
Also, the characterizations are a lot stronger than you usually see in PWP stories. Me like.
Also, the characterizations are a lot stronger than you usually see in PWP stories. Me like.
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a non-icky human-decepticon lemon! I hardly thought it was possible. And both characters have really believable personalities! And the woman isn't a teenager! Hurrah!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I almost came. You write your stories in a way that alows the reader to feel like the main character. You make it perversely hot.
I'm really glad you decided to post your fics.
I'm really glad you decided to post your fics.