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by swordqueen

person Natalie
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not much to say here other than HOLYFREAKINGCRAPTHATWASHOT.


“So, what was that about no one decent having me?”
“Maybe I’m not decent anymore.”

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I loved that line. I wanted to hug poor Starscream so badly...
person Thornwitch
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Usually stories along these lines squick me out. Maybe it's because Starscream is a bottom, and Barricade is a deviant, but neither of them are sadists? Plus the descriptions avoid becoming Ikea erotica despite it involving giant robots...
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are doing some great one shots. And I am hooked...Thank you for a great story.