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January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good story, hope it continues.
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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, its really good. I hope you touch upon it again soon. Truely excellent.
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an addictive story! I do hope you'll be able to update it someday soon.
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I missed this story so much and so many chapters I have missed reading. Life has been crazy with college/marriage/twins/job.. Off to read this chapter now.. I know I'll love it just know that if I don't get to come back and reply after..
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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a protagonist that makes bigoted jokes after looking down at someone who makes bigoted remarks. Hypocrisy: what a character builder
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh No!!!
Needs more chapters!!
This is a very good story. A bit different than most with the different alien races. I like it. It's refreshing. And i love how the friendship between her and Trunks is moving at a natural pace.
I do notice a few errors here and there. (using her instead of him or He...I see this one in many chapters.) not a big deal and not often enough to get on my nerves.
I hope to see a update soon, I'm really into this story.
Good Luck!
Needs more chapters!!
This is a very good story. A bit different than most with the different alien races. I like it. It's refreshing. And i love how the friendship between her and Trunks is moving at a natural pace.
I do notice a few errors here and there. (using her instead of him or He...I see this one in many chapters.) not a big deal and not often enough to get on my nerves.
I hope to see a update soon, I'm really into this story.
Good Luck!
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November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I missed a new chapter! And. so much happened.. I love the friendship between Hamilton/Jack it just seems to flow. Can't wait for more!
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter please dont stop writing this story i wanna know what happens
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really great. You do have some spelling errors, and some sentence structure errors.,(wrong word in the sentence or just in an un needed place. But all in all well written and a good plot. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Please let me know when you update.
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
killer!