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schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
^____________________________________^ This is going to be fun stuff. Hopefully everyone has a good time getting out and they find the brother...started at the fiorst chapter I read so I may have forgotten if he was dead already or not. More please!
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please, can we have another chapter?

me love jack!!! and trunks kicks ass!!
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
pretty please have more ready!!

*big puppy dog eyes*

petty please.........
person Priscilla
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love love this story so sorry I havent been able to review that much. Hopefully, you'll get to update soon.!
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
finally an update!
loved, btw!
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn good start to it I like the way things are playing out the tension between these three family members is just surreal can't wait to read what happens in the next chap
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head sadly*
"Damn!"
Last part is what got me she really was not thinking when she picked that fight
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, this just keeps getting more and more interesting!
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the detail you use and how you the take time to point out and explain each individual thing that is happening in every chapter. You're really good at that and its weird. But i like it. =]
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
eeek!~ I want more please oh please!