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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As always you live up to your pen name...pouting...Oh well it gives me a good excuse (not that I need one) to start over and re-read your fic from the beginning...lolz...ps this story is cool-as-shit
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard I cried at the "frozen butter" bit. :D
NEED MOAR!!! This is good stuff, keep it up!
NEED MOAR!!! This is good stuff, keep it up!
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, pure kickass chapter. I love it!
Yeah, the "stick of butter" line had me on the floor in tears. Your writing is so awesome, the humor and all the little details you put into it, I feel like I'm repeating myself a little, is just amazing. With all the revelations this chapter, I actually went back and checked in the previous chapter to see if I could identify anything about Hamilton that would have given away his secret. Yeah, the new revelations this chapter were pretty awesome. What I loved most about them was they didn't feel like you had just made them up on the spot and added them in at the last minute. You did a great job describing the new guests and connecting them to Jack. Jack really must be something else in battle if she took out their assasination squad and then all the Xeno's.
Hope the big guy is ok. Jack needs to spend more time with him. They've kind of been in their own worlds so far not really interacting with each other ever since their littlt fight. Should be interesting to see what the repercusions of his injuries are.
So yeah, simply amazing. I'm so excited to see where it all is heading! :)
-DGD
Yeah, the "stick of butter" line had me on the floor in tears. Your writing is so awesome, the humor and all the little details you put into it, I feel like I'm repeating myself a little, is just amazing. With all the revelations this chapter, I actually went back and checked in the previous chapter to see if I could identify anything about Hamilton that would have given away his secret. Yeah, the new revelations this chapter were pretty awesome. What I loved most about them was they didn't feel like you had just made them up on the spot and added them in at the last minute. You did a great job describing the new guests and connecting them to Jack. Jack really must be something else in battle if she took out their assasination squad and then all the Xeno's.
Hope the big guy is ok. Jack needs to spend more time with him. They've kind of been in their own worlds so far not really interacting with each other ever since their littlt fight. Should be interesting to see what the repercusions of his injuries are.
So yeah, simply amazing. I'm so excited to see where it all is heading! :)
-DGD
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OM F'in G. that was coooool. Heart-pounding action...I loves it. I had to read it twice because the excitement was making me read too fast...lolz. I love the part about him playing with the treadmill...that was actually incredibly cute. My favorite part was when she discovered that he was holding back during their fight and he snapped the guys neck with one hand...fucking awesome. I loves the plot. I bow to you, Oh shiny, sparkley one...and yes you are definitely a Torture Queen. I want more...yes, we needs it precious.
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A stick of butter...Was it frozen?...I laughed my fucking ASS off...that was so fucking funny I can't even tell you. Another fucking awesome chapter that has left me panting for air. Oh noes..poor Trunks,but he's a tough piece of Yautja jerky. By the way, when the hell is Jack going to ask Trunks what his real name is. If you need any suggestions let me know..I seem to be able to come up with 100 Yautja names and -6,000 when it comes to humans...lolz.=D Hail oh reining Queen of torture!!!!!
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
kickassfulness to the max!
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing! I cannot don't think words will be enough to express just how awesome your writing is! I had to read the chapter a few times actually because each time I read over something I had missed or encountered a little detail that I had glanced over before but understood it now.
Again, I am just in awe of how detailed your storytelling is, ever scene that you write is so full of description that I can easily picture it in my mind playing out. The pacing is also great, it doesn't feel rushed and it's not dragging either. I loved in this latest chapter how you went through writing about the experience of being in captivity and how they're reacting to it. I love how Jack keeps being in awe of Trunks and how she learned not to piss him off because of how easily he could kill her. And I enjoy all the humerous bits you throw in there, especially of Trunks getting pissed off and hurting someone.
The scene at the end is definitely cool and mysterious. Meeting Trunk's brother who Jack has met before (briefly) and how he doesn't seem concerned about Trunk's captivity. I guess there is more going on here than is known, for it makes sense that Trunks has seemed that he's been holding back a lot in the face of the abuse he has taken. Now, he apparently considers Jack a "valuable asset" for some reason too. Wonder what that is? Can't wait to find out!
Again, amazing writing and a great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next and who the "guests" are.
-DGD
Again, I am just in awe of how detailed your storytelling is, ever scene that you write is so full of description that I can easily picture it in my mind playing out. The pacing is also great, it doesn't feel rushed and it's not dragging either. I loved in this latest chapter how you went through writing about the experience of being in captivity and how they're reacting to it. I love how Jack keeps being in awe of Trunks and how she learned not to piss him off because of how easily he could kill her. And I enjoy all the humerous bits you throw in there, especially of Trunks getting pissed off and hurting someone.
The scene at the end is definitely cool and mysterious. Meeting Trunk's brother who Jack has met before (briefly) and how he doesn't seem concerned about Trunk's captivity. I guess there is more going on here than is known, for it makes sense that Trunks has seemed that he's been holding back a lot in the face of the abuse he has taken. Now, he apparently considers Jack a "valuable asset" for some reason too. Wonder what that is? Can't wait to find out!
Again, amazing writing and a great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next and who the "guests" are.
-DGD
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, i cannot wait for the next one!
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh, i was so hoping she would manage to kill the general!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I can't wait to read their fight! Update soon.