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by swordqueen

person aniay
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You'r fanfics are both hot and inspiring, thanks to you I finally finished my own fic. PLease write more and don't even try to repeat that you can't write sex scenes. You write them flawlessly and 100% to my taste.

person GabrielC
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes I know I have reviewed it once already but chapter 2 was so good. It wasn't just sappy it was complete awwww... then you fall a little in love with Starscream. I do hope it doesn't end badly for them... Really loved this story. :)but I am a sucker for happy endings of a kind...
person GabrielC
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!! I love Starscream even more after this!! (Yes I know he's yours don't worry ;) ) I like this! Looking forward to the other half!
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure who I like better Barricade/June or Jennifer/Starscream. If I had a choice though I would just go with them both and live in blissful happiness. I think of all the scenes I like this one the best though, simply because Starscream was extremely sweet even though I'm not sure he was trying to be. Another great story I am very pleased. Keep up the amazing job.
Till Next Time ^_^