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for Rough Justice

by GabrielC

schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i thoroughly love the way you have Optimus take over... i've been enjoying this story through all its chapters, and can't wait for more!

JM
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This really opens up a dark and conflicted side of Prime yet still manages to keep him in character. What a tough decision for him to make! (I can't help but hope that Ironhide still suffers a bit more after this, though--is that wrong?)
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was rough... I still can't say I feel sorry for him. Sucks that Optimus had to do it. Hope everyone has learned their lesson if not I don't know what to say. That being said great story! You ended Radio Silence very nicely.
Deuces ^_^
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you wrote a follow-up to Radio Silence. I bet it was hard to write. Ironhide got what he deserved. He may not like other people's preferences, but he can't just go off on his own like that. Optimus needed to discipline him. Also I am glad you had Ratchet give Ironhide a piece of his mind. Well done. Good story.
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Granted, Ironhide deserved it, but at the same time.
We all have things that we fight for -- what we believe is right, even if it's in the wrong ways, and that's what Ironhide did in Radio Silence. So I feel sorry for him that he's not willing to accept [ on a peaceful level ] what others believe is alright, but I do understand him to a point [ not the point that I'd go out and hurt someone for something I was against and they weren't. ] Yet, I'm pretty sure people could relate to Ironhide on one note at least, feeling as though something they believe in is right and not ready to let that go.

Maybe in another story he might eventually start to open up to the fact and at least be peaceful about it, instead of resulting to violence, torture, and cruel shouting matches.