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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that certainly explains a lot about Optimus and Ironhide. Excellent story, I am glad you wrote it. You certainly write the characters well. Hope to see another from you again.
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Optimus! He's been through a lot of stuff in this story that will have repercussions throughout his life. Megatron is creepy and Soundwave is just...icky! Lots of tension and conflict in this story--well done!
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!! LOVED it!!!! needs one last chapter, an epilogue, maybe?
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Cliffhanger! Now I really want to know what happens. Ironhide why can't you control your temper?! I wonder how Optimus will handle this.
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I love the way you wrote Ironhide. The interactions between him and Optimus seemed so natural. Keep up the good work.
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. We finally get to meet Ironhide. Optimus needs someone like Ironhide to show him how to fight and also someone who can see what Megatron really is like.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...so if Megatron approached him differently, maybe Optimus would have accepted him. Good filler chapter, keep up the good writing.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it certainly was a dark sad chapter. You wrote the physically and psychological aspects of the two very well. I want to see where this goes and what the consequences will be. Good job with the chapter.
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how Optimus was shown how to inflict punishment. Will Megatron go too far in that Optimus learned where to draw the line with Ironhide? I can see Optimus being a naive, innocent bot; but where did Megatron get all his darkness from? I would like if you could explain that a little bit. Even though this will probably get really dark, I enjoy your writing and look forward to another excellent story.