rate_review Reviews

Sad. I like how they each took a part of Skyfire. In all good job, nice story.

Well, the last chapter certainly wrapped things up nicely, or at least as nicely as it could get, everything considered. It explains a lot about Starscream and both his sometimes skewed perception of things as well as his relationships with everyone around him. But, yeah, I agree with Barricade on this one- as unintentional as it may have been, Skyfire royally screwed Starscream up. Good story!

This has made me cry every time I have read it. It's emotive in all the right ways, not too sappy or sentimental. A beautiful and tragic story that explains a lot of why Starscream is the way he is and having read your epilogue for the first time, the last part it a nice touch, ties it up very nicely. This is one of my favourite stories and one of the best I think you've written to date. I really loved it.

;_;
Oh no... Skyfire.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

*cries* oh this is sad, yet it makes me want to keep reading. Poor Starscream.

Nice chapter. I like how he is cautious and tries to map out where he is. *waits for the hammer to fall tomorrow*

You're going to make me cry, aren't you? I have a feeling the end of this story is going to break my heart and yet I can't stop reading it.

::Moans:: oh this is going to end so, so badly isn't it? I want this to end well but, considering everything... yeah. This does give us a good look into some of the often ignored aspects of Starscream though and that little desperate/ reckless streak does explain his actions with Jen in the end of "Six Hours." I was wondering, are you using this story to set up an upcoming Starscream/Jen story where there are repercussions from their, er, bonding? I had no idea what an R.A. did until I went looking for an explanation and there is a whole world of possible situations that could be addressed and played with... Sorry, I really like your stories and find them both creative and entertaining.

Nice. *Waits for the next chapter*

Alone? Uh oh. I like it so far, keep going. :)