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Haha this is brilliant! I love Aodh, he is pretty switched on beneath the playful 'fool'exterior and wow....you got Nuada down pat! He would still be obsessed with hating humans even if he was reborn. He'd never give it up. Brilliant, I love it. I hope Aodh gets his end in eventually haha! Nice as :D

from me the author...

EDIT:
now originally I was planning a very adult sexual (yes with all the naughty bits!)
slash M/M yaoi fantasy
(as the very first inspiration came from my wet dreams! which are very naughty and sexual! indeededo!)

but the more I plan this story out..
the more I write...
the less it seems likely this will happen.

NOT B/C I cant write slash... I can! and do indeed love yaoi!
NOT B/C I dont think Nuada is capable of a M/M slash romantic relationship with Aodh...
BUT JUST B/C I feel the story demands that the themes be about acceptance and tolerance
and the reconciliation of the Fae and Humans' worlds...

THE MORE I GET DRAWN INTO THIS STORY IM WRITING
THE MORE THE STORY TELLS ME WHERE IT WANTS TO GO
THE STORY IT WANTS TO TELL
THE LESS IT SEEMS TO WANT TO BE JUST ANOTHER SEXUAL FLUFFY STORY

so anyone expecting alot of sex..
Im sorry I will likely disappoint you

ofcourse there still may be some sex...
but thats NOT gonna be the REASON this story is being written

Okay.... I didn't want to admit it but :;sigh:: I like Aodh... and even though I couldn't fathom the idea of a slash story with Nuada I am warming up the idea of him and Aodh. I have to say though I think you have a challenge ahead because it's going to be reallllly hard to write gay Nuada... I'm interested to see how that turns out though ; )

Thanks for the reviews on my story btw and I also like the title. Very cute.

hey a review from the author... this is to my 3 fans...

2 madhalfheatlump - thx u very much my friend... hopefully I will keep your interest thru future chapters!

2 GellyBelly - thx u... but what did you find confusing? I really appreciate critique that I can use to improve my writing.
Ill update as soon as I can... Im writing chapter 2 now... its about half way... so maybe once a week an update
and yes its a slash story... M/M relationship... but its not gonna be pwp (porn without plot) Aodh is obviously interested in Nuada... but its not gonna be an easy roll into the sac.

2 Amethyst - ah comon EVERYONE has to love Aodh! LOL... jkin.. (Aodh: no she isnt! you must ALL love me! for I am irresistible!)
I like challenges! in the movie the only sexual indication we were given for Nuada was incestuous for his twin sister... but during his long exile he may have relieved his frustrations in many ways,... maybe he and Mr Wink were lovers as well as good friends. Who knows... incest doesnt bother him, maybe he is BI... I should like to caution people not to impose 'human morality' on immortal elfs... you live long enough you are gonna experience many different relationships. I do hope to keep your interest!
your welcome! keep writing your story, Ill be there to read it.
hehehe title is fun isnt it?

Omg! This story is great.. Kinda confusing but great.
Hope you update soon... Hmmm.. Is this a slash story? \
Just wondering..

I think this is a great start to the story. I'm very impressed with the writing and the characters. I was drawn in by them and can hardly wait for more!