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Nice Chapter. That response was quite measured for Isard. I guess. Trying to wonder who's left for Katarn to shag. Maybe Miraz Terrik smuggles him off Courscant in return for favours?

Minro continuity issue. At least one story in the EU by Zahn/Stackpole establishes that Ysanne becomes director after she frames her dad for losing the Death Star plans, he gets execute she gets the step from Agent to Director. Not that I want to pick holes in the plot of porno or anything.

Just read the last couple of chapters. Fuck Kyle-Invent Suncrusher. Maybe Katarn should be keeping it in his pants.

Great story so far!
Next chapter Kyle katarn and Mara Jade

Phenomenal. Extremely hot, very well written.
I think my favorite aspect of this story is that it
is in no way tame where the sex is concerned,
but avoids degradation. It's not disrespectful at all.

Keep on updating! Do you take suggestions as to
Kyle's future conquests?

Excellent reading so far. It's a rare treat to read an erotic story that doesn't skimp on characterization. I'll definitely look forward to future chapters of this one.

Hey there

Nice story so far. I am very glad that katarn got some attention :)
Keep up the good work

Very good! Please update soon!