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for One Last Demand

by zoinomiko

person Nex
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked this. From the dub-con sex to that unexpected detail with the Aldo/Donny relationship.

Aldo and Hans were portrayed just perfect, their voices, their motivations were in character, and I really liked your (even if subtle) insights in Hans' sociopathy, sarcasm, and cruelty. That's just who he is, you have captured all of that with that clever dialogue.

Thank you so much for sharing this! It's pretty delicious and fucked up (just how I like it!). I love it.

(Maybe we can read Aldo getting back at Hans? Perhaps it's not enough for Aldo marking Hans' forehead for life...)
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, WOW. This was wonderful, delicious, funny and in character.
I always knew Landa wouldn't mind making out with a Jew. God! <33333
person Munez
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write Landa. Good job. I couldn't help but snicker at Aldo thinking Landa gave good head because he is a polyglot.
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I've been looking for just this sort of thing! oooh, Landa Landa Landa....mmm, hmm! More like this! ohhh! Love how you squeezed itinto the movie plot like that. Made sense. Good writing, good characterization.Great job on the slang!
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely delicious story. It's well-written, wonderfully raw erotica, and the characters from the film are clearly there. Please write more--I'd love to see a different take on this where Landa "turns the tables," as it were...