AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Sky and Ground

by swordqueen

schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi- I don't know when this was written, just found it. I find AFF hard to navigate...
I really liked it, despite it being totally unlike most of the fics I like (all decepticons, a not bad-ass Barricade, etc)The emotions were really well written, the smutt was hot, and I found myself in tears several times. I'll be looking into your other works. Just wanted to say thanks.
kathy
person Juliesan
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do you have something else in the works now that this one's over? I know you have a RL and stuff, I just lurv your writing ^_^

and yes, the site ate my formatting on chapter 6...nom nom nom
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
End? Please no! Dont let this story end! Its fantastic!
Would you reconsider if I review every day? (hopeful look) I cant go without my Cade/Warp fix!

PLEASEEEEEEEE!

PJ
person Juliesan
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.O Great finish! Poor (or lucky?) 'Cade, surrounded by horny seekers XD
person Juliesan
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading Confrontation and the only thing that disappoints me is the fact that there's only one more chapter ;_;

Absolutely loved the verbal smackdown. Megatron "Well I'll just-" *SMACK* "How about-" *SMACK* "What if I-" *SMACK* "Slag." LOL Denied Meggers, denied.

I'd like to do a fanart of the Quaterne for you, but well, as Barricade mentioned in one of your other stories, Starscream has a very, um, different shape (Narcissistic Space Dorito FTW!!!*coughwithchickenlegscough*) So, now I'm wondering if Thundercracker and Skywarp look similar, but with different color schemes.

Sorry for the double review removal, stupid italics didn't want to work >_<
person Juliesan
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First let me say that Chapter 48: Third Bond, was FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC!!! Nice tension in the beginning with an emotional sweet ending :) Very very nice. Poor Thundercracker, I can understand feeling like you have to bear everything on your own.

Secondly, OHMYGOD SQUEEEEEEEEEE X3 Sorry, fangirl moment ^_^; Okay, got that out of my system. Thank you so much for the positive review and use of your methods. Don't worry about review speed :P I'm just happy to have more than one review lol. I've got a friend over at the moment and I think I scared him with my flailing and squee-ing when I read your review lol.

You say you don't know much about the Autobots, but, I loved the hell out of Controlled Burn XD Mmmmm, I think I'm going to go re-read that *^_^*

RAM
person LeSang
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that there's going to be more! I've been reading this every spare moment I've had, I feel slightly bereft now that I've run out of chapters.
I hope there's an update soon! X
person NineCrow
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm REALLY Enjoying This... Looking Forward to the Next Chapter
Thank you for Sharing
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, all I can say is its about time Screamer starts to break free and be himself. He's been the victim and weakling for far too long... but you do have to wonder... is it weakness that keeps him going back or an inner strength he doesnt realize he possesses?

Ya know, when ya think about it, they are becoming a quartern again, arent they? Cade has been folded into their midst and settled, even getting a seeker to admit love for him. Has any other been able to do that?

Seems rather odd, or foreshadowing perhaps, that Screamer got angry and disgusted by the thought that Soundwave had raped Cade. Was there an underlying factor there? hmm......

Course, and I'm just guessing, Screamer said that just handed them something they could use.... could it be that Wave may get into trouble, seeing how he knew one of his officers was hurt and merely probed him and left him without summoning help? Especially since said officer returned to work, completing his tasks even thoug he was severely injured?... bastard... And it better soften Thundercracker... Cade was hurt because of him and Wave took advantage, and not to mention how awful Cade feels and how badly he wants to actually PROTECT the trine. Dumbaft.

I think Screamer doesnt give himself enough credit. The trine isnt his only strength. And though he may not want to admit it, he's attached to Cade, and when he said he'd stand or fall with his trine, he knows he's not as alone as he thinks.. at least, in that respect. SOmeone else would be willing to sacrifice themselves to save the trine, and I believe SCreamer saw that in Cade's optics when he told him that Wave would use the info against Warp andt he trine.

And its about damn time he stands up and faces everything. A physche can only take so much before it breaks, and I do believe Screamer's 'sick to death' levy is about to break. (WEG)

I have sooo many ideas on where this is going... Epp! Probably be best to keep my yap shut and watch how it plays out..... (guilty look) Sorry....

PJ

schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cade better not be seriously hurt, or I"m seriously gonna throttle an author. (taps foot) Awesome job putting Soundwave back in. I was wondering what the communicating pest was up to.... now he finds Cade alone and bleeding in a practically disused room and that most certainly gives him enough fodder for another tribunal or other actions, either against Cade or Warp... Or could TC be held into any account? He just arrived and I'm not sure exactly what his 'function' on the ship is... other than another aerial unit with Screamer.

Spark cover! That's what I forgot~ Argghhh! Poor Warp and Cade... lets hope Warp does something heroic and sweet to Cade to make up, at least in part, for what he's done. So sad....

I must admit I'm rather disappointed in TC and Warps confrontation. I mean... TC just leaving after Cade does, says something about Screamer being upset and Warp just folds? Seems rather... anti-climatic. Warp's rage at what was done to someone he loves, especially someone so small and who didnt deserve such treatment, was rather explosive... no way it would have wound down to a fizzle with just a mention of Screamer being upset.

I also believe that Screamer knows how much Warp and Cade mean to each other... so wouldnt he want to see his trinemate happy? It seems to me that he showed a LITTLE sliver of what he truly is by telling TC that Cade makes Warp happy... there was an underlying tension there that was so very promising....

And why would Warp go back to the other two when he was obviously still in emotional pain... TC was the freaking cause of it! Why subject yourself to that kind of torment when there was someone who was just as damaged and needs someone to help them through? ARrrghhh...... seriously... throttling....

PJ(Bluestreak's competition)