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First of all... this SOOOO wasnt a lame time to put Last Song in. It fit in PERFECTLY! Wow.... I just LOVED everything about it. The tenderness, the teasing, the sex of course, cant have those two alone without a little nookie. LOL.... and I loved the foreshadowing. I felt so sorry for Warp... he knows where he's going and what he's going to get into and it was killing him even before he left. So sad. (hugs to the jet)

I dont wanna press, but I would like to submit a prompt, if possible? In 'Heat Seeker', Prowl tells Warp that if the situation was different... or something to that effect... point is, he sounded a little interested... but hesitant.... I really wouldnt mind seeing Warp finally get his wish.. maybe warp in, grab the door winger and teleport far away and... let the fun begin. (dreamy look) I had a couple of ideas, but I'm not very good with this sort of thing and I'm afraid I'd chop it all to the pit and back. LOL

PJ

OH man! Okay, this one I really couldnt wait until a couple of days a few dozen rereads... I was wondering if TC was gonna get in theway. That bastard! Oh man... whoops... bit repetative, but when you're trying to get your point across.. what else is there? lol

Doesnt Cade realize that Warp wasnt telling him to stay out, as in (stay out of my life/dont get involved) when Warp KNOWS how vicious and cruel TC can be and he just wants to keep Cade away from that? Ack.. PLEASE tell me that Cade went to see Screamer! He could tell him what happened, though I have a feeling Screamer may already know.. he's a sneaky/smart little jet... little... (snort)... I doubt Screamer would come betwee them.. he may be the same size as they are, but I think the other two have him beat by sheer brutality.

I'd love to find out what happens... are you going to do any little snippets of what Screamer was doing/thinking? I know it centers around Warp and Cade, but Screamers had a HUGE involvement with those two... some quite DELICIOUS involvement... hmm.... first chapter... yummy....

PJ(not quite as long winded as normal)

WHOOT! (does happy dance) Thank ya for clearing up the Skyfire/Jetfire thing. :D Okay, story....

Poor Warp, waking up like that. I must admit my mind went to some very dark places when I read his part. When you mentioned the streaks of silver, the first thing that went through my mind was that the trine had sensed when Warp linked with Cade and TC had come all pissed off and dragged Cade off somewhere. I was seriously going "NO NO NO"... but then I read that Cade just went to work, and boy, was I realived! You just KNOW TC is gonna be pissed... Screamer would probably be happy, but not want to show it in front of his teammate.... man, what a wicked, tangled web you wove.

Poor Cade. Doesnt seem like when your mind is most turbulent, you get the LEAST amount of solitude and peace to sort it all out?

And back to Warp... Screamer was right... they've been trained to think about pain and retribution. When Warp told Cade he can hurt him back, I wanted to go and slap the snot out of TC. If cons actually HAVE snot that is.. oh well... I'd put sugar in his energon. (EG) If it works on cars, it would work on their engines, right? lol

And youre right.... considering you're using Bayverse, you've done an excellent job of continuity..... he should take notes. LOL Revenge of the Fallen was a huge disappointment for me. Makes me shudder just thinking about it. Let's hope the third installment will be better... if not, I say we find the man and give him a thorough spanking. .... TC style! lol Oh man, i could die happy if they have the trine in the next movie... course they may not be able to remove me from the theather.... hmmm...(goofy look)... seekers..... See, I always thought "Seekers" referred to body type. They orginally were these trilobal looking things before being formatted into F-15s.. 22s for Bayverse.... and later, there were three other 'seekers' that were still on Cybertron... they're the ones that made it rain and made the Autobots start to break down... They were called SEEKERS too... so I thought it was the design. Well, thats my take on it... considering i never heard the coneheads referred to as seekers from the cartoons.... Ack... and again... Bluestreak influence.... I swear, i could talk/review all day!!!!

PJ

I was a little iffy on this one because the pairing is a little odd to me, but I gave it a shot because, well, I love me some Barricade-- and I got hooked from the first chapter. I hated to have to stop reading it so I could go to work. Stupid real life. There is a LOT of depth to the characters. I started it because Imma 'Cade fan, but now you've managed to totally hook me on the Seekers as well. Poor Starscream, I want things to work out well for him so badly, and I so want Thundercracker to get his aft handed to him. By Onslaught. Total smackdown. No saftey word like he uses with Barricade. *Glomp* Some of your Onslaught bonker-ness has rubbed off on me. I'm going to have to see if I can find some more fics with him in them.

Also, really liking this portrayal of Barricade. Don't get me wrong, I love seeing him all snarky/sarcastic/funny, but the 'Cade you have in this story is SO sweet it's impossible not to be all like, "awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!"

Incase you haven't guessed, I love the story, and can't wait to see how it turns out.

Xen

Ok so I love this story! Everytime I see it's updated I have to take a breath and slowly click wondering how much I'm gonna cry this time. Its so angsty but the story is so well written and explained beautifully. In love with this story. i just hope things sorta work out for Cade and Sky, I'm a sucker for happy.. or somewhat happy endings, and with everything they have been through so far they deserve to be happy. Although I know more angsty-ness is incoming. :) Keep writing!!

I have to read a few times before I can post, it just takes me awhile to soak it all in. This chapter hit from so many ways that it leaves the reader spinning. First, let me say that I"m glad you didnt have Warp to come back to find Cade in a death match against TC. I was seriously worrying over if he got back, stormed to TC to tell him what he thought and it turns out Cade was there defending both he AND Screamer, cause Screamers a wreck and would probably be cowering away from his trinemate and not want to fight him. I was teetering on panic attack at thinking Cade trying to take TC and Warp having to come between them. I'm SOOOO glad you didnt give me a heart attack. Thank you!

The title of this chapter fits on SOOOO many levels. Warp, and in a sense Screamer, let Cade IN. He's aware of their dysfunction and has wiggled his way into their lives... There are other definitions but that one tops my list. Of course, the VIOLATE part has tons of meaning too. Warps violating others, mainly his trinemate just for the sake of appeasing the OTHER trinemate and lets face it, ALL of their sensibility and psyche and ego and minds and sparks, has ALL been violated, either by an act or the lack of action to stop such heinous things from being done. And of course, the full meaning of Inviolate, which just SCREAMS of Cade's mix into the fold. He may have been abused by the other Cons, but he would be willing to do anything for Warp, and to some level, Screamer, if he thought it would help them. Its soooo sweet. He doesnt know the full extent of TC's 'vigor', and I doubt no matter what Warp does to him, he'll forgive him because he knows the REAL Warp has regrets and sorrow.

Ack... I could disect this all day, but I dont want to clog up the review board. I'm sure you get tired of reading these rants and my, how they are extending to a rather LENGTHY ordeal.

Sorry bout that.

Oh, before I forget, Warp has spiked Cade three times... this was his third. He spiked him in the first chapter when Cade was sandwhiched between him and Starscream... oh... that was a GOOD chapter....

So, did Warp and Cade merge there in the landing area, or is Warp feeling better from the naked honesty that Cade was showing? Or the closeness was enough to help erase the darkness? Was it that simple? Or are you going to throw another loop in there? :D

Okay, I'm going.....

PJ :D

Well, lets see if I can remember everything I wanted to post about this chapter. First... Cade isnt alone and wouldnt have to face TC alone... he could distract him, I"ll sneak up behind and shoot him in the aft with a sabot round. -EG- Teach him for picking Screamer and causing all of them to be so dysfunctional. He really needs to have his aft handed to him.

Okay, I read your other stories, especially the one about Screamer and Skyfire merging sparks and I have a question. Apparently Skyfire and Jetfire are the same mech, at least a lot of people believe that, so if this set in Bayverse, then wouldnt Screamer recognize Jetfire when he was fighting in Egypt? Or were Jetfire and Skyfire brothers or the same design and Screamer didnt feel any connection as the Bots and Cons were fighting?

I think it was very poignant that Screamer reached for Cade, even so far as pulling away from TC. He knew Cade was worried and it shows how much Screamer really cares about him. I KNEW there was something more than just an interface between them... though not as strongly as what Cade and Warp have. I LOVED the part were Cade stands up for Screamer..... I just wanted to do a little happy dance. LOVE to see TC beat down.. let him be on the recieving end for once. He was always the ringleader, right? So he never allowed the others to get as violent with him as what he commanded them to do, right? wait... TC wouldnt try to hurt Cade like what others USED to do to him... would he? OR did he only like to watch Warp hurt grounders.... and whats Cade goign to do if/when he sees Warp in full Kick Your Ass Mode? He gets scary... but its a hot kind of scary. -eg-

I got a warm, glowy feeling when Screamer said Cade was Warp's chosen. I literally was sitting here going, -Awwwwww-..... got a few looks from family, but their used to my antics. :D

More chapters please.... more than one a week... please.... -pleads-

Well, it took a couple of tries to FINALLY get to read this chapter and then I had to reread it a couple of times to let everything sink in. I feel so sorry for Skywarp. He wants to be happy and everything he's trying to build outside of the trine is threatening to fall apart. He's right though.. he does deserve some happiness and TC had no right to stand in the way. That just burns me. Maybe it would be for the best if Warp beats the shit out TC and vents all that rage. I would hate to see it if it was misdirected toward Cade or Screamer. And Cade being alone all that time, probably clutching his spark cover, which I have a feeling Warp just forgot to replace after he nearly sparked with Cade when he was sleeping. Warp should face Cade, just as he is, covered in trine fluids and all and speak from his spark. I think Cade knows the trine has a link that can never be broken, and lets face it, TC's actions have put more than a strain on ANY type of bond, so if they all can be together after all that, theres nothing that can break it. TC does need to finally fess up and admit how fragged up they are... dysfunctionally functional. lol I really dont like seeing Screamer so weak and pathetic. When he's fighting or glaring down a fellow Con, I dont see him as being so simpering around his trine. And another thing... Warp's hold over Screamer... where Screamer hurt him and now thats all he sees are those scars along his wing, the one Cade touched in Warps sleep, surely after all that time, and the numerous things Warp has done TO Screamer, wuoldnt that balance out? Surely getting beaten and raped by your trinemate would erase any guilt felt by maiming a wing, however intentional or not. ANyways, enough babbling.... cant wait until the next chapter!

PJ

No no no no.... Cade needs the attention... damn it. That blasted TC... but I just LOVE the foreshadowing of Cade standing up TC for Warp's sake.. that was/is going to be.. so beautiful! Even if he gets thoroughly trashed in the process, I have a feeling the other two may step in to protect him. Seems as if Screamer is really protective of Cade too.... and he may say its because of Warp but I think since Cade stepped in to keep Onslaught from hurting him, Screamer really warmed up to him... if he CAN warm up. LOL Maybe they should introduce Onslaught to TC and show him out some of them Cons really like it rough and can play with the seekers... hehehehe

As always... fantastic.. and angsty... and cant wait for the next chapter! Glad you survived the convention and hoping it fueled your muse. :D

PJ

Oh man... not layered in angst is it? Sheesh...

But I must say it was very eloquently done, even if I do just want to take duct tape and super glue and mold those two together and DARE TC to do anything about it. I have a feeling TC is going to screw everything up but I think Warp is stronger than he thinks/realizes. I think he's just never had a strong enough excuse or desire to turn around and tell TC that it ends. They are still a trine, but they have been punished enough. They've paid a horrible price... for a long time... its sadistic to think they need to spend the rest of their lives feeling this hopeless and soiled. I think even Screamer sees a bit of hope, knowing what Warp is feeling and though he may not love Cade the same way, I think he does have some affection for him. Screamer above all should know that love conquers all... and heals. Wounds may never be completely healed, but their ache can be minimized with love... its the perfect balm. ;) I just hope things work out... I dont know where you're going with this and you've proven to have a twisted side... not that Im complaining :D, I just dont know how much pain and suffering the boys will have to endure... not to mention the readers.

Oh, and frequent updates would be appreciated... say... daily? EG

PJ