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for Acclimation (working title)

by MahouMakai

schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with that last comment. Also I've been checking this story everyday so please please please please please update already!!!! Pretty please? *pathetic whimper*
person Sightsoblind
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not FREAKING COOL!!! You will post more young lady if I have to review stalk you to get them... Ahem... That's one... Don't you dare make me reach three you wont like me if I have to hit three...
Awesome story awesome respect for the world and tech etc. blah blah blah NOW MORE WRITE LESS WHINE
person Katy
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written and I like how you introduced the characters. Please continue your story.
person Bee
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This could be very very interesting. But I am not sure why you are stopping to write this?? I mean you have so much to work with, like how will Karek and Strawberry get along...when will they starting liking eachother, will there be conflict? I like that Strawberry is headstrung, pretty, and smart, she can give Karek a run for his money or at least will be really interesting watching them bite heads with eachother! lol.
Anyways I do hope you continue this story and I will definitely review if you keep posting!!
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!