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for The Demon's Bride

by miladyoccult

person Shyann
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes,Yes,Yes,Yes The Creeper gotta love him!!!!
Can't wait for more soon..
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So was the ultra sound normal? This story is getting intense...I can't for the next chapter. It is so interesting that I can't help myself for the reading of it. Thank you for the dedication and for a really good chapter.
person LadyAura
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG...i know where you going at, i mean the last paragraph just gave it way becuase my sister just had her baby no more than 11 days ago and i still remember how she was with all three of her...

oh! i don't want to give it away and please update soon...

it's getting too good!!!
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So can she see him doing real things or is she sharing dreams with him? I can't wait to find out.
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
her dad's a dick!
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it was really good, and i liked it for the most part, however please check your spelling a bit better
person LadyAura
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say about this story is...IT WAS FREAKEN AWESOME!!! and btw, this is my first J.C. story and i really loved and please update soon!!!!
person Shyann
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please post more soon lov'in it!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...Not bad the story caught me like a nightmare but it was so well thought out that I find myself looking forward to more. Thank you for an interesting if not scary story.