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for A Trick of Eros

by Dreamwind

schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! Definitely my favorite story on this site. Please continue soon!
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you should so do the first two choices, the one with Jimprime and Spockprime XD also i read the end of this chapter and felt like crying, their fair well was so sweet.
person Ovelkara
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man i teared up reading chapter 5 it was so sad TT_TT, but i cant wait to see what happens next update soon. and i would pick 2) Prime!Spock created an accidental bond with Kirk while on Delta Vega and has gone into Pon Farr. Nu!Spock isn't happy about that. At. All. for the next one. ^_^ update soon
person MsShadow
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I desperately need to read more of this story! I really adore the voices you've given the characters and look forward to seeing just how Jim and Spock's relationship evolves with the time apart.

In short - more please?
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story! :) I love it and can't wait to read more. Poor Jim...having a baby alone. I hope the baby is a boy...that looks just like Spock,,lol...totally cute and a way for Jim to be close to Spock. :)The options is all cool, but I like the one with the Primes in it...especially Prime spock and Nuspock gets pissed with the territory thing. lol
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor spock... <<>> ... TAKE 'ER WITH YOU AND BE DAMNED THE OUTCOMES YOU DORK!!!!! any who now that that's out of my system, please up date soon... or when you can. ~is waiting for it with baited breath~
person Ovelkara
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woot! an update so happy to see one you had me worried for a min that u dropped it. love the chapter and cant wait to see what happens next. update soon ^_^
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person Wilder
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE this story! I am a major slasher and am super picky about my het, but you are doing such a good job with it so far! I look forward to anything and everything you have to offer! Will Spock be leaving? I can see one direction where he tries to get the chance to be with Kirk but is denied and not able to return to say anything to Kirk who of course ends up pregnant... Is Kirk going to be turned back into a male while pregnant? I assume that is what the mpreg is all about. I bet he won't even know he is pregnant. The way you have them meet, and the characterization of Spock's mom along with their interactions and Kirk's back story are so well done, I can't wait to see where else you are going to take it and where the sequel will go... Star Fleet Academy? The Enterprise... will they recognize each other? Or rather, will Spock recognize Kirk? Gah, I am so into this story it is ridiculous, you managed to hit so many of my buttons and most of them are imagined! :D
person Ovelkara
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay an update and a very nice one too ^_^ cant wait until the next update i really want to see what happens next.