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July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I really liked this story.. Although it was quite... weird some times, you know what i mean ;)
Really well written, although I got confused a few times with the perspective seeminly switching characters without warning. Although Rol'ei's reaction at the end confused me a bit. Anyways, great writing, keep it up!
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story so much. The way you so clearly tell the story from both their viewpoints is marvelous. I positively can't wait for more. Please continue this story. It is something I look forward to reading again and again.
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May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Rol'eys sister will react when she learns that the lover of her brother is not only an uniltiranyu, but also a male. I assume that Rol'ey and Ted will have to return to the Omatikaya or to Hell's Gate ( where this Jason-idiot is lurking) What about if you let Jason end up in the stomach of a Thanator? I would appreciate that :-))
The food issue isn't actually such a problem. Of all Pandorian food, humans can eat at least Episoth seeds, Hermitbud seeds and Tapirus meat ( according to Pandorapedia). So Ted's only task wouldbe simply to find a way to process them in a way that humans can eat them.
But anyway, Ted and Rol'ey should talk with Mo'at, I think when she saw the couple she knew immediatly that they were not only teacher and apprentice..
And, now that Neytiri is the new Olo'eyctan, will Jake become the next Tsahik?
Please update soon.This is really an awesome story. It would be a shame to abandon it.
The food issue isn't actually such a problem. Of all Pandorian food, humans can eat at least Episoth seeds, Hermitbud seeds and Tapirus meat ( according to Pandorapedia). So Ted's only task wouldbe simply to find a way to process them in a way that humans can eat them.
But anyway, Ted and Rol'ey should talk with Mo'at, I think when she saw the couple she knew immediatly that they were not only teacher and apprentice..
And, now that Neytiri is the new Olo'eyctan, will Jake become the next Tsahik?
Please update soon.This is really an awesome story. It would be a shame to abandon it.
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting interesting. update soon.
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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! With Ro'ley and Ted and their ikrans you've got really great characters and I hope you will update soon the next chapter.
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really interestin with the story from Starweaver's point of view... I hope he recovers
and rol'ei and ted get together ... they need soem alone time... maybe get them both drunk and alone in a tent with guards makin sure they stay in together
and rol'ei and ted get together ... they need soem alone time... maybe get them both drunk and alone in a tent with guards makin sure they stay in together
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December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I truly adore this story. It has a whole new take on the Na'vi and Avatar relations that I greatly enjoy. I sincerely hope you will add more to this. I eagerly await more of your writing.
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December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, great chapter. Hope things go well for chapter nine!
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 5 and 6 were even better than the first chapters! I really love that Ted and Rol'ei's relationship isnt instant or the 'oh no im not gay but I have to' its far more realistic!
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok, I tried to review but I think something went funky.... so if i end up reviewing twice i apologize! Anyway, you are a wonderful writer and I am truly enjoying all of your characters. The re-telling of Robin Hood made me giggle! Love his Ikran! Is Ted going to get one maybe? Can't wait to see where else you take this!