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OH this is a lovely continuation. You've captured the spirit of the world and the people so well. I truly adore it. And the dialog, grammar and plot pacing -- all those technical details -- are perfect. Great job so far, and I'd love to see more! The moment of the markings was very potent. I loved everhthing so far, and the perspectives you've taken enhance the experience very well. I feel like I'm right there!

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This is awesome. XD I love it!!

Oo, how interesting, I'm really enjoying this fic! I hope that there's an update soon!

I like this so far ^_^. I just watched the movie not too long ago and it was amazing XD. Can't wait to see more

I had to re-sign up cause its been so long since i used AFF that i forgot my login. And just to comment on your story, i love it! i just had to tell you that, and i hope you update soon.

Great story so far, this is one of the few that I check often. I look forward to reading some more chapters soon.

Wow, you've been busy! Avatar has only been in theatres for a week an already you've written two long chapters. Thank you for taking the time and putting in the effort! I enjoyed reading your story.

I see you... you are a quick study, just saw the movie I think you have the "Feel of it!" G

very very good beginning keep going and post soon