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as Ifuller 711 said, it would be thrilling, too, to finish the first encounter between Barbossa and Elizabeth, that one in chapt. 6 before the battle on shipwreck - island, where he says : “Fer tonight at least, ye be mine alone.” I´m really greedy for more and that encounter would be VERY interesting, as well !

Wow! What a story! Thanks for posting more! I really enjoyed reading - so passionate, so strong. As always, I can see every moment.

Can you write the scene where Elizabeth and Barbossa originally are together intimately? That would be really thrilling also!

Please keep posting more in either or both time lines!

Thanks again for sharing!

Lynne

Wow...where should i begin ? It is long, it is hot - it is so damned good, that i´m speechless. It´s so very detailed but also sensitive, not only pure sex. It´s an interesting style-element you added, that the story often changes from the present to the past, with hints of what happend between Hector and Elizabeth, when they had their first night together. And it is a really long chapter with a long and not common foreplay... YESS !! Finally somebody wrote about a bound Hector...what a nice and thrilling imagination ! Last but not least your story is completely brilliant formulated, as ever. It was really worth to wait so long for ! One of the rare gripping barbossabeth -love scenes, thank you so much !... now under a cold shower....

Conni

Holy... 0_0

Great story so far, though I must ask please continue!

Bonny,

I'm so sorry that I haven't responded before now, but I just realized that you had posted another chapter. Brilliant as always and makes me want more. I could see every action in my mind's eye. I can see why Elizabeth feels so strangely about Barbossa's transformation, I would feel the same way. I'm glad she was able to accept him this way too!

Please publish more!

Is there a way to alert your readers when a new chapter is posted? I used to find out through Barbossabeth...

Thanks again!

Lynne
Las Vegas, NV

Arrrrr! A little cliffhanger ! But it is a good introduction for the next chapter. I expected that you´ll describe that particular "meeting" happened in the past between Elizabeth and Barbossa one day bevor the battle. ( I hope you don´t want withhold it ? ) I was also a bit sad, when Barbossa suddently changed his appearance after drinking from the water of the fountain of youth... it was so great because i really felt the same like Elizabeth ! But Barbossa is right, he follows his own goal. It was a deep desire for him to stay young, you saw it in the 3rd movie, when he told the crew from that fountain. And it is even better for his little son ! It would be very interesting to know HOW he found that fountain...*smile* maybe a next plot bunnie ? I like this chap, Hector is sexy as ever and brilliant written as well !!!

Bonny,

I love this story! You have written the characters so thoroughly. Each twist of a phrase, each thought beautifully portrays Elizabeth and Barbossa. The language and intonations of the characters are portrayed true. I had to read many of the sentences over again because they were so beautifully written and so mature (not the naughty kind of mature) in nature. To tell the truth, I can hardly wait till there are more mature themes too, because you write them so well also.

Please keep writing - can hardly wait!

A fan indeed!

lfuller711

o_O...you left me speechless, this was HOT. And this promise sounds really lovely... especially for the next chapter !
Great written as ever, amazing how you build up the conversation between those two and how that situation changed suddenly at the end. It´s thrilling how Hector is able to restrain his desire... even it´s only for a short time...!

BonnyBlondeLass,

I hope you haven't given up on this story. I love your writing and want to read more. I also appreciate the direction this story was going in. Hang in there!

Lynne