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for Dance in the Dark

by Hnoss

person GellyBelly
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I always get the giggles whenever you update!!
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far, I love how you're building the character before you introduce Jake and I love that Tom was so seductively flirty in Kerry's memories. I also love the fact that Kerry has white hair and how into detail you go about the whole 'killed mother earth' thing. It makes it that more shocking for Kerry to see such beautiful life all around him here.

But I would have liked it if you had put in a bit more of an explanation of this 'Sleeping Beauty' healing sleep. I'm interested to know how it works and how it 'heals', why it turned his hair white and why he looks as young as a teenager.

All in all I like it and am looking forward to Jake Sully appearing on Pandora. ^_^
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eagerly awaiting chapter five my dear. It's interesting to know they have a book out there, I personally want the dolls and posters as well but well...no money you see. I want that book most of all! Besides the actual movie of course, that's first and foremost on my list.

Think Jake will be in the next chapter? Or will he come in later? I hope sooner...It is starting to get a bit monotonous without some form of distraction in the form of a twin.
person GellyBelly
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man! Just read the last chapter! awesome dude! It always gives me goosebumps whenever I read this story.
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! i adored this movie and i just love the concept that you have come up with and can simply not wait for more so please hurry with the next chapter so that i can drool over my computer some more! i love how they used american indian culture. i think that it would be awesome for him to also be intrested in the cheifs son.
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow. I love this story so far. And Avatar is the greatest movie ever. I've seen it three times already. *cough* Anyway great story. The interaction between Norm and Kerry is very interesting to say the least. I can't wait to see where this story leads and how much fun our lovely white haired "Sleeping Beauty" has when he can finally explore the outside world. *baits with many cookies for new chapters?*
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your very welcome ^_^. This chapter is even more interesting than the 1st =D. I'm eager to find out more about Kerry. Cant wait for more ^_^
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way the story is going. :)
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey i feel exactly how u feel about Avatar. i can't wait for the DVD to be able to watch it over and over. You should get the book 'Avatar: An Activist Survival Guide'
That book is really cook and really helpful.
Anyway, Love the story so far!
Kerry seems interesting and i like following him.
Just one thing, I thought Tom was killed on earth...i mean it's fanfiction so you can change whatever you want, but thats what i got.
great beginning, can't wait for more!
person ina
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I think this story would be great! Can't wait to see when Jake shows up! XD
I love the way u described Grace and Trudy, they're seemed to be very in characters!
Is this gonna be KerryxJake? Please continue this wonderful fic!
PS: I agree, Avatar is the best movie eva!