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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn You! Please update another chapter! I've been waiting so long for you to update because I really really love this fiction! Pretty please! I would like to know more about how Optimus and Mikaela got together and Sam will be out of the way! Please!!!
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I am waiting since March and I am really impatient now. When do you want to update? This story rocks and your reviewers do enjoy this fic. So bring your fingers down to press keys on the keyboard and write another chapter or I will be mad and much more than now. UPDATE SOON and that's a threat XD
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! Pretty please don't torture us. I beg of you. This is a story I can't stop rereading. I finished it now and please update soon. Please, please, please, please. I count on you. Please
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! I can't take this anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! I can't take that Optimus and Mikaela aren't together and Sam has to be there to interrupt everything. Please update soon!!!!!!!!! I want to read more about this fic. This is a very good fic and I just can't sit here and wait. I check on this fic several times on a day. Please
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I am anxious to see what's next so pretty please update as soon as possible. This is the greatest fic I've ever read so please don't tease us. Please update soon.
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much and i hope you update soon. I find Prime and Mykaela to be addictive. I love the way you write them.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and you are doing an excellent job with it. I mean it flows so easily and is well written. Prime and Mykaela are awesome and you make them sizzle when they are together.
Since you are the author I know there is some way that you can write Sam out of the story;LOL kill him or something.
You are an awesome writer so please continue.
Since you are the author I know there is some way that you can write Sam out of the story;LOL kill him or something.
You are an awesome writer so please continue.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so addicted to this story. I Love the way you write Prime and Mykaela. This story is so well put together. I love the concept of it. You have the makings of an awesome story on your hands. I wuait impatiently for your next update.
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Give it up Sam you cannot stop BigBoy when he wants something. I LVOE the way you write and I LOVE this story.Prime is all SEXY and strong Keep writing!!!!!
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The concept has merit, and could certainly be a very interesting story. My only problems with it are your punctuation, which is minimal to non-existent, and your grammar. You tend to switch verb tenses a lot, or use the incorrect form of the verb entirely, and many of your sentences need a comma, or some other form of punctuation, to keep them from being run ons. Other than that, great story. :)