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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the dialogue between Prime and Mykaela! It is raw passion, addictive, sexy addictive,primal; I absolutely love it. I could read fourteen chapters of that alone but I know you have to put other stuff in it and that brings me to my next point. You put thought into the compostion of this story. You did not just throw something together hoping it would stick. You actually made this so solid I hate that I have to wait to read more of PriMyk. I think this story is awesome so hurry up with chapter five I need my fix.
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please update soon. It's so erotic I hope they will get to the point. And without Sam's interruption. Please kill him or make the decepticons kidnap him or bury him just get him out of the way. Prime is soo sexy, irresistable. Make them a couple yayyy little babies or sparklings :) that would be gooodddd. Please pretty please update sooooooooooooonnnnnnnn. I can't wait to read more.
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This I was not expecting. This story is amazing. And, this in a section that I did not think many check that ANY good stories would develope from. This story is well written and composed. I am definately returning for more.
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully Done! I love the writing because it flows and creates a mood that I find awesome!. You have a fanstatic story on your hands so continue
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is coming along. Usually one can tell by the third chapter if the writer can maintain thier ability to feed your addiction and you have. This is Marvelous stuff. I look forward to more.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Truly Truly AWESOME! I love it! I love the flow and the writing is fanstatic! I am eagerly waiting for more.
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NICELY done very nicely done. Love the flow and body of this story Awesome job. This is wonderful stuff Keep the Prime train ROLLING
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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have created so far. This pairing is awesome. I love the way you write them. This is one of those stories I will read over and over until it is finished. Awesome work keep doing it
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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story. But then I love Transformers and any story that is intelligent and well written will become a fan of mine but your story has suceeded beyond expectations. I really look forward to more.
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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh you tease! Just when I thought Optimus was gonna have his wicked, wicked way with Mikaela. He says "Home, I will take you home."
Man, keep a reader in suspence why don't you. XD I hope Officer Cooper gets a big metal boot up the butt when his plot is found out.
PS. Don't forget you need to update Aid'ians Doctrine too. Pretty please
Man, keep a reader in suspence why don't you. XD I hope Officer Cooper gets a big metal boot up the butt when his plot is found out.
PS. Don't forget you need to update Aid'ians Doctrine too. Pretty please