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June 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you decide to continue. Very impressive you manage to stick to cannon yet added richness to these characters. Look forward to reading the next chapter if you decide to continue. Take care and god bless.
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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...wow. I reallyx10000000000 hope you continue this!
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very very good. you have talent. i can very well see this as a scene in the movie.
my opinion. draw it out slowly. let it build. and let the gentleness show in natyri (or however you spell it lol)
not saying you didint. but other writers dont. and it annoys me.
my opinion. draw it out slowly. let it build. and let the gentleness show in natyri (or however you spell it lol)
not saying you didint. but other writers dont. and it annoys me.
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well voiced, I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you should definitely write more. I liked you insights into Neytiri's thoughts and emotions. I'd like to hear more.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is good! I would love to see more. I like how you are focusing on the characters very much, and that we know them from the movie. Also, I like that you are exploring new things, like weaving, and not just reiterating. You get Jake's mood down very well, and I like getting into Neytiri's head. Can't wait for more!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please please! continue this story!!! I love seeing this from neytiri's point of view, and I love how your covering the parts the movie skipped over. keep going!!!!!!
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have written this really beautifully. I love it and cannot wait to read more!
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it lol I like it a lot, I hope you continue