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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it. you've captured their personalities perfectly. i really hope you continue this ^^
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKE THIS! plz do continue it! i like that you caught subtle things like that the Na’vi have only 3 fingers and thumb... I like that its a story about Jake and Neytiri, that you havent just gotten rid of main characters to make your own story... this is lie that movie just more indepth!!!
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Avatar fic I've read so far! Kudos to you.
The story is well as a stand alone, but I'd love you if you would decide to continue it.
The story is well as a stand alone, but I'd love you if you would decide to continue it.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good!!!
i like hearing the other side of the whole training!
can't wait for more!!
i like hearing the other side of the whole training!
can't wait for more!!
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this storie, so well written!! Please please please write more chapters!! :) :) :)
Becky xx
Becky xx
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I rather like this! You certainly have caught her gruffness, along with her gradual change of opinion rather well. Can't wait 'til the next installment!
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely not what I come to this site for and definitely well-written. Good characterizations and weaving in with the film. Hope to see more (with sex).
SailorNemesis
SailorNemesis