rate_review Reviews

While I like it I feel like it strayed to far from the facts at some point. For example, all Na'vi people know the story of Toruk Makto, it is not just the Omaticaya. Also, Mo'at has a great amount of power and no one would simply go against her wishes like that. The whole tribe wouldn't banish him like that, he had helped to save their people from total destrcution, at worst he would no longer be chief. But otherwise it is a very good story that I like very much. What I missed most was the imagery. I felt like a lot of imagery was lacking and I didn't get the experience I was hoping for after watching the movie. In the movie everything is so vivid and the Na'Vi are admittedly very attractive, yet I didn't get much of that imagery in this story and it was a bit too much for me to supply all on my own.

It takes an awful lot of skill to keep me engaged in a story beyond a couple of chapters, reading every word, let alone twenty-one. Bravo. This was compelling, stylistically written, plausible, and entertaining from one chapter to the next without insisting too heavily on one thing(description, sex, etc.). The use of prior-chapter subtleties to make a point or move plot later was expertly done, and it really just thrilled me to be so into a story that I had to keep going on, all the while being entertained. I don't really know what else to say but thank you. So, thank you. And, please, keep writing.
~by_veidt

OK...I hate you in a good way, :) I started reading your story last night and ended up reading all 21 chapters. GREAT Job. I hope to read more or your work in the future. AMAZING!!! P.S Please Keep posting here, but you might also try posting on fanfiction.net net as well.

Oh I'm so sad it's over but glad it's a happy ending. Absolutely loved this story from start to finish.

Aww, I'm kinda sad to see it end, but still glad that it was a happy ending.

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Just saw the movie yesterday and this story was exactly what I needed to carry on living in the world. Absolutely loved it. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Good chapter, but maybe they could go through some sort of trial to prove themselves, Not to the leader, but to his mate and the rest of them? It just seems a little strange for all of them to be so accepting so soon. Great story though! Keep up the good work.

This story's very cool and there's many things I love about it.

Keep up the great work.

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I'm really, really enjoying this story! I do hope that you will continue it. I like Jake and Norm's relationship and i'm anxious to see if they will hear from the Omaticaya again. At least for now they've found some acceptance and happiness. Keep up the good work!

I love this story! Keep writing! I check almost everyday for updates!