rate_review Reviews

I love this story! Its great, and i hope you continue soon. I wish the jake/norm scenes were a little more in detail, but the rest is awesome!

ooooh thought of something.... jake and norm have bigger problem than speakin English rather than Omaticayan... they have 4 fingers and a thumb...(5 toes) whereas Na’vi only have 3 fingers and thumb...(4 toes). think Han and Dierdy just might notice that...

just was able to finally see avatar even tho i was syked to see it for soooo soooo long...
didnt want to read any fanfics till i got to see the movie myself

ok review.. interestin... good plottin and characterization... Norm is fun... he didnt get much movie time... and you made him believable...
please keep playing up him being a scientist... he'd be driven by the biology of the planet... you got to think geeky to write him!!!

about that... Norm I mean... i was abit shocked you just did away with Neytiri and made both norm and jake gay... even tho Im a rapid yaoi fangirl! I found the switch too sudden and slick... oh well... it wont stop me from reading...

im interested by these two new characters... rape!!! seems like the humans may have disrupted the planet in more subtle ways than just the destruction of all that forest...

there a possible plot bunny... think the original human base... where jake landed.. it was in the forest... the humans destroyed all that land to build... how long was it there... long time... the home tree wasnt the first and only huge disruption the planet suffered due to the humans... the ecosystem seems to be entirely interconnected with all the species... so changing moral social values could be the result

maybe you can have Norm figure out some of this...

awwww poor babies!!!!
stupid prejudice na'vi
i hope they're okay, and that there wasn't poison on the dagger he used to cut the chief necklace.
i'm glad Toruk still listens to him!
can't wait for the next chapter

Wow, this is a great story! I really like where it's going! Pretty pretty please keep writing it? :D

This story is so good!! I could see the tension between Norm and Jake. I like that Mo'at wants to help and it's just really cute
Can't wait for more!!

This is a really good story. I love the characterization of Norm and Jake.

I know where their goiiiiiiiiing =D. Great story. Can't wait for more ^.^.

OMG Cliffhanger! You cruel, cruel author. XD Don't keep me hangin!

Yessssss!!! Some Avatar fiction! I usually would not read the ones with Norm in it... But this story is so good that it made me change my mind. GREAT JOB!