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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story could probably use a proofreader (the content is lovely but the spelling needs work). I guess I've already made my point. Crap. This story is very hot, and I like it a lot.
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December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you posting again :D look forward to next chapters, eagerly.
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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story!! I hope you can update soon!! I really want other dominant Obi-Wan smut!! ;P
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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel the love with the shoutout!
I have enjoyed the latest chapter, although i find it odd the two before that are identical bar the shoutout to me!
I do like the writing, i even like how i can believe Obi-Wan would do that. I also like that theres some actual story! It's just generally very good, keep it up :)
I have enjoyed the latest chapter, although i find it odd the two before that are identical bar the shoutout to me!
I do like the writing, i even like how i can believe Obi-Wan would do that. I also like that theres some actual story! It's just generally very good, keep it up :)
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good story and good smut, i like the dialogue, i like the way its written.
Well done!
Well done!