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for All The Right Moves

by flamekaat

schedule October 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

i adore this story

schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMG I Loved It!! Please update this story is Great!
person tigervixen
schedule September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very awestome and cool story please contine would love to read what happpens next
person Juliesan
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
STICKY PNP FTW!!! I've gotta say, I don't know who came up with it first between musashi & GabrielC but damn is it awesomesauce! You utilize it very well. I liked Barricade's little 'oh slag' moment when Blackout confronted him, nicely done. Good emotional/sexual tension.

Oh, btw, “Lick my after burners you sorry excuse for a singularity humper!” had me LOLing harder than should be healthy XD

Moar? *Waits patiently for four-way xeno o_o*

I've got a little project utilizing Sticky PNP xeno as well. I'd be honored if a writer of your caliber gave it a look *^_^*