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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*yawn* Another Mary Sue OC. Not surprised.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow i jsut love this fic U must update immediately! it is the best lost boys fic i have read in a very long time and trust i read alot of lost boys fics. Your oc is so lovable , she is pretty but not overtly so (u dont keep reiterating her beauty which is good) and has a mysterious past that i want to knw more about but you didnt overwell the reader with a loooong chapter about it. I love how she is connected to dwayne and how she is develop a connect to the other lost boys who u have characterize perfectly. I also love how you havent forget that they are vamps and need to feed and u havent forgotten max either. you've added animal but their present in the story is not annoying I love this story so please dont leave me hanging off the cliffy UPDATE SOON ASAP PLEASE recey2010 out