AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Challenging the Balance

by BlueBastard

person Takai153
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! The plot is funny as hell and your your doing a great job with the character development. I can't wait for some real sex between Jake and Tsu'tey. If the light one in chapter two is any sign, those scene will be absolutely incredible. Are you going to turn Jake back into a guy? I'd like to see her stay as a woman, its really original and that transformation was why I started reading this. I hope at least you'll write a couple of full on sex scenes between them while Jake is still a girl (and it'd be even better if Tsu'tey would lay claim to all three of her holes :p). Keep up the awesome job and please update as soon as you can!!
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know...I usually LIVE for your slash, but DAMN is this story hot. Which only proves how much I love your writing style. At this point, I don't even care if Jake gets turned BACK! I hope you keep this story going! Tsu'tey needs all the help he can get! You can do it, Tsu'tey, hang in there. Jake will be yours. *evil chuckle*
person Boopster
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I noticed it's been a loooooong time since you've worked on this story. BUT! I really hope that you continue on with it. It's quite enthralling. ^_^
person GB
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome and amazing. I hope you plan to continue this soon. I'll be watching for updates. :)
person Chiaki D.
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another helping of this one TOO, please! And I think I just better go ahead and read ALL of your fics. Thanks again! <3
person acisse
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I started this with mild curiosity and became engrossed with your story. I loved it the passion and heat I feel from the character was great. Please continue to update I look forward to reading more from you.
person sky_040
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love ur story at first i wasnt so sure but i'm hooked love it please update soon don't give up!
person mancer
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting idea there; definitely interested to see the change of things when/if Jake turns back. (I'll admit it, I feel worse for his ikran than him!)

Oh, and out of curiosity, what's up with the Na'vi words in the last chapter? I *think* its supposed to be that Tsu'tey is saying stuff in Na'vi that Jake doesn't know yet... but maybe you could make that clearer in the beginning?
person Silent-Sunrise
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it....its really sweet!
let me know when you update on:

music - prodigy - at - work (at) hotmail (DOT) co (DOT) uk
person Jerlayne
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when the hell are you gonna update? It's like my favourite fic and its hanging in limbo D: i demand another chapter :P please? MORE!