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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really hooked to your story, now! I loved the pool part and now can't wait to read more. Will you update soon... Yes? Pretty please...?
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your use imagery is very beautifully done. I think that is abhuge part thats got me hooked on your story. Thanks for the update so soon it made my lunch;)
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeet. More soon, yes? =)
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story thus far. I really enjoy it, which is strange for me considering I don't normally like first person stories. I can't wait to see what you do with this. I hope to be reading more from you soon.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tehehe, funny, well written and strangely enthralling. Do update soon again, yeah? =)
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is really well written and very original! please update soon I would love to read it and I am antisipating this "hunt". Kudos to you
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you add another chapter soon! I can't wait to see if she runs teehee