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by cideon

schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord. This story was incredibly well written. Ever since I watched The Terminator 2 I was hoping I would find something like this. I absolutely adored the way you wrote T-800 "feelings" and they way he saw the world around him. And the way you wrote John Connor felt about him... God! Just wonderful. The "love making" was awkward and hot just as it was supposed to be, it felt pretty real and in character. It doesn't matter how many times I tell you how much I loved this story, because I'll still be at a loss of words to express how much I enjoyed this. I just wish the story was a bit larger. It's great the way it is, don't get me wrong. It's just that this is the first T-800/John Connor fanfiction I've ever found and it was so great that I can't help but wish you had written more. Great job!
person Homunculus
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story! Glorious! Fantastic! I'd never imagined that someone would write my Terminator OTP. I truly hope that in the future you write more of these two in different situations, hopefully some involving copulation >:D
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic!! This is lovely. Wow, I can't believe more Terminator fics like this don't exist on AFF! This was a great short story, wonderful work!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm that's definately something different, I like things that are different. I enjoyed your style of writing and the original plot. Please keep up the great job. ^_^