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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. 11 hits and not one review? Well allow me the pleasure of being the first:
This story was amazing. The imagery, the sentence structure, the way you kept the characters the same yet made them your own. Beautiful.
If you were to ever write original you should contact an agent and get published. It would sell wonderfully, no matter the genre. I especially love the description of the Luna Bay ocean (too green, too deep) it made me feel like I was out of place (in a good way).
Please keep gifting the world with your writing.
This story was amazing. The imagery, the sentence structure, the way you kept the characters the same yet made them your own. Beautiful.
If you were to ever write original you should contact an agent and get published. It would sell wonderfully, no matter the genre. I especially love the description of the Luna Bay ocean (too green, too deep) it made me feel like I was out of place (in a good way).
Please keep gifting the world with your writing.