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by pewpew

person Vegemite is a Vitamin
schedule September 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is a bloody awesome story, mate! One of the best I've come across.

I'm surprised it's not on Archive, I reckon it'd get a lot more traffic there.

Are there any plans for future chapters?

person Sagikamikazi
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Haven't been on in forever. Reading fics again is awsome. Thanks for this chapter, I WAS DYING FOR THEM TO FINALLY GET THERE! :)

person Sagikamikazi
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, so for sure, update plz!! I've fallen hooked and I can't let up! Sooooo.... Waiting! :)
person Shyann
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When are we going to get more of this...Post more soon...
person Fredrick
schedule October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It is so good to see this story is back again, definitely one of the best predator stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.
person Shyann
schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your Very Welcome....Please post more soon....Can't get enough..
person Shyann
schedule October 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow...So glad to see this is updated..
Was a lurker for so long..Coming out the shadows...More asap please...
person Tatyana Gordon
schedule March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I so wish there was more of this and even though it has most likely been abandoned by its writer, it will always hold a place as my favorite story in its entire section, maybe even the whole site.
person Siya
schedule April 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love reading this story, it is well written I have read through it a couple times :) If you could update ASAP I known its been a while but I need to know what happens.
person julie
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story!! Please continue it!! I know its been a long time since you updated but please this story is fantastic!!! Please let me know if you have updated on another site or something!!!