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by pewpew

schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter
I love how you got the last chapter
You need to make a roleplayer.me account with two of the predators
person LittlexJellicle
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What is going to happen next?!
aww there making procuss
hopefully she keeps him as a mate when
the elder comes back
person sherry
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really miss this story...Don't find good one's like this often..Hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow
Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope you update soon please!
person cricket
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chap! Raz is such a cutie and the oils were cute too! I am glad to see the story continuing
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Raz'ha wanted to wake her for mating, but laid still, enjoying her musk. He understood her pacing better, if not her reasoning. Soon she would mate him, but not yet.

I feel I am like Raz'ha... I want her to mate with him too... but I understand her relutance... she has major hang ups about monogamy and I can see why she doesnt want to fall in love or become attached to a man from a different clan/ship

I wonder how this is all gonna be solved in the future
person DeathGodDist
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just had to say Bravo. I had worried you had given up on your story, but I am so thankful to have been proven wrong. And still your writing quality is simply amazing. I love this new environment and how Amelia is coming to terms with how different it is compared to how she has had things before. And the level of interaction you have with the characters still remains top-notch.

As always, will be eagerly anticipating the next chapter. :)
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story… it seems so put together and solid. The characters are amazing and I get excited when I see you’ve updated ^_^ can’t wait to see what happens next- yummy bits maybe ;3
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Update, please? I'll be your best friend forever and ever!