rate_review Reviews

Ah, such a lovely Christmas gift to have a brand new chapter in this wonderful tale. I couldn't have asked for better :)

If you were ever concerned about your character becoming too much of a "Mary Sue", I think you should definitely rest easy after this chapter. A believable series of events that have brought her into what appears to be a traumatic panic attack after being faced with the grim reality of her situation. Up until now, she's of course had Val'jek and the foundation of their strong bond to rely upon. But now that he's gone, and she's in a truly alien environment with someone who she doesn't yet have such a strong bond with, she's probably regressing back to old repressed memories and feelings she had after the events that transpired which brought her to Val'jek. Hopefully Rah'za and Mah'sic will be able to understand what's happening to her and get a handle on things.

As always, just such a joy to read this one. And will be eagerly waiting for the next one :)
-DGD

eeeps!!
she is not reacting very well to the moving, is she?

I'm ecstatic that you finally updated! I jumped around in my seat and actually put down my new comic-books (it's safe to assume I can be an adult and still read comics, no? XD). Raz'ha's stalker isn't going to back down, is she? I see a lot of confrontation in the near future. I'm happy you enjoyed the visual.

I teared up a bit T-T Poor Amelia! I think I'd flip out too.

Happy Holidays <3

Omfg!!!!!!
I didn't even know that predictors had their own off shoot story line... awesome! I should get my hands on those sometime soon!
I am very pleased with your story! I loved reading and seeing what comes next... I also liked the little mix of Ooman culture. Too bad they can not produce sucklings... :(
Good luck,
Hope to read more of your work.

cool story! I wish you would update though!

I really liked this chapter and hope you post another soon!!! It will be neat to see how you plan to write the next coming chapters with V leaving and Raz taking over her care... oooooo and now the Cov drama teehee

Wonderful! I love coming back to lots of new chapters and that goes double for such a well done story. I am not one that pushes for sex every chap or even every other chap. I like to read a well written story rather than loads of porn. You are striking a very nice balance. There is actually "story" in your story. I am emotionally invested in your characters they have some depth they seem more than just 2D. Keep up the good work :)

I dont think she was too forgiving. 1. he is her mate. 2. it happened a long time ago 3. shes a female. our hearts practically bleed forgiveness. especially if it wasnt her that was wronged. because that would have a different response entirely. Thats an interesting situation with Cov'o you have set up. Its too bad he cant just give the baby to amelia. that would kind of solve things until he could gain full custody. but i can see all the problems that would come with even asking that. but i think it would be fun to see how she handled a child. and she would let cov'o see the baby and take care of it better than that other female. in case you havent noticed i tend to rattle off any thought that happens by. anyways it was well written as usual. The dinner scene was pretty amusing. i love cantankerous old men. It has so much potential.

What happens next? ^_^ I'm addicted to this fic =D