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The Chase is always the best part of Yautja mating and one of the reasons I love reading PredFanFiction. I was giggling like a schoolgirl and frightening my husband because of this chapter! This is awesome! I've also noticed your vocabulary and diction are expanding. The more you write, the better at it you get :D

I'm still here :)

And I'm so loving the mystery and intrigue surrounding Co'vo and what he's all about. I like how Amelia is trying to do good and get him and his father talking, but I have a feeling it won't be so simple as that. Things are getting good with the farewell banquet coming up and then the goodbyes, I'm definitely looking forward to what is coming.

And of course, your inventive use of the "healing salve" deserves two big thumbs up :D

-DGD

i'm still reading! Don't quit now :-D It's a great story and I want MORE!!!

11... well I think it was a fun chapter... the banquet/goin away party/dinner is gonna be interestin
Im lookin forward to the next chapter

This is one of my fav Pred stories. It is very well written and all of your characters are great even the not so likable ones. I can't wait to find out all the juicy secrets and watch as the puppies grow up. I also hope that Valjek comes back alive because that would just be sad if he didn't. Ahh now I'm rambling. Great story and please update soon.
Laters ^_^

ch 10... glad to see an update and drove right in! this was an interestin chappy with all the formality and intrigue.. i look forward to part 2

I just love how complex things are, even for such a simple thing as a, hehe, "formal banquet". I can't even begin to imagine how the normal gatherings are done if random fights, challenges and upbraidings are the norm. I also enjoy how you are still introducing new characters (interesting for Amelia to find someone new who can speak her language well) and continuing to flesh out details with others (continuing the hintings at Co'vo). And of course, I still found the humor, such as the remark about the "nice skull" on her chair, and some other remarks of Amelia's that she wisely keeps to herself. :)

As always, will be eagerly awaiting what happens next.
-DGD

*creeps around the corner* That's right Pew I am stalking you ONCE MORE! MWAHAHA *giggles at her own bad joke*

For just a formal dinner, that whole scenario was intense. I was on the edge of my seat, as to say. Awesome work! Can't wait to read more ^^

I can't wait for "one more" chapter, teehee